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Uploaded
Feb 24, 2015 | 1:46 PM EST
File Info
Loop
1.4 MB
1 min 3 sec
Score
4.17 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 4.17 / 5 stars
Plays
609 Plays
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Genres:
Electronic - Ambient
Tags:
apple
water
made
mighty

Author Comments

A song I made a long time ago.
Mixed it real quick, and released it.

Its a simple loop. A melody line with some percussion, nothing much.
Critics are always welcome :)

Want to download the track? Send me a message with your reasons ;)

Reviews


VolutoVoluto

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Hi there! :) I review/criticize tracks on the audio portal in three categories:
- Mixing (Technical part, volume, frequency balance, etc.)
- Composition (Melody, chord progression, intervals, etc.)
- Feeling (Basically what I feel while listening)
Remember, this is all my personal opinion ;) I listen with a Sennheiser 650 HD headphone.
I apologize in advanced for my English :D

Mixing:
In my opinion this track is kind of poorly mixed. The bass sound doesn’t have much sub and the kick can have a lot more punch. I don’t want to see you need to make a punchy EDM track, but at the moment it is kind of unbalanced. The sounds are layered on top of each other instead of mixed together. At 0:36 the track/vocals are clipping too.

Composition:
The composition isn’t very special to me. This isn’t a bad thing at all, but look out that you don’t make it to simple. It may give the feeling of: „Heard it already…”

Feeling:
It feels unfinished to me. Because it needs a lot of mixing it lacks the feeling of emotion.
Tip: Look up some mixing tutorials. It sounds like you are missing the basics a little.
Rating: 2 stars



Spac3cak3Spac3cak3

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

I fell asleep



AeronMusicAeronMusic

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Hi there! :) I review/criticize tracks on the audio portal in three categories:
- Mixing (Technical part, volume, frequency balance, etc.)
- Composition (Melody, chord progression, intervals, etc.)
- Feeling (Basically what I feel while listening)
Remember, this is all my personal opinion ;) I listen with a Sennheiser 650 HD headphone.
I apologize in advanced for my English :D

Mixing:
In my opinion this track is kind of poorly mixed. The bass sound doesn’t have much sub and the kick can have a lot more punch. I don’t want to see you need to make a punchy EDM track, but at the moment it is kind of unbalanced. The sounds are layered on top of each other instead of mixed together. At 0:36 the track/vocals are clipping too.

Composition:
The composition isn’t very special to me. This isn’t a bad thing at all, but look out that you don’t make it to simple. It may give the feeling of: „Heard it already…”

Feeling:
It feels unfinished to me. Because it needs a lot of mixing it lacks the feeling of emotion.
Tip: Look up some mixing tutorials. It sounds like you are missing the basics a little.
Rating: 2 stars


TheMightyApple responds:

Well, that happend.
But if you don't like it, critize it your own way. I especially like feedback from people who don't like it.
But this is just immature...


balancedbirdsbalancedbirds

Rated 4 / 5 stars

If you add some choir to the music,it will be better.