i can see this on a nine inch nails track. not metal by my standards. it doesnt sound a damn thing like slayer, but not horrible im not torching you. you've got sound potential. just put your creativity out. =)
Hell Awaits is Slayer, and this don't sound too Slayer or Heavy to me.
I know im not trying to make it hell awaits for slayer I originally try to make it hell but it was taken so I put Hell awaits and it's a slayer song though slayer kicks ass!