That guitar synth doesn't sound very realistic, but I really like the melody at :25. Kind of sounds a little too cutesy for punk, but then again I know absolutely nothing about punk. It's got a pretty upbeat vibe which I like. Almost reminds me of the intro music to LITERALLY EVERY SINGLE MTV movie about stereotypical 2000's-era high school kids. XD I think these song weeks have been a great way to work on a lot of different styles for you, LE. You've really grown as an artist throughout them, I think. Keep it up! ;D
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Song Week Number Five!
And, here we go. We can see quality start to decline. Yes, there are tons of balancing issues here. But I'm too sleepy to care otherwise. I should've learned from last Song Week and done these earlier... NO MATTER IS TIME FOR SLEEP
Thanks for listening and hope you enjoyed!
LunacyEcho responds:
=> realistic =>
Budget. :(
=> cutesy =>
Yeah, that's what I thought too. When I planned this out in my head, it was a lot more grungy and crunchy, but that really didn't happen when finally making the song. :P
=> MTV =>
The more I get older, the more I'm glad I never watched MTV while I lived in America. :)
Thanks for the tons of reviews!
Lol, yup.
The percussion is actually pretty nice, but wow, those guitars aren't to the most part. They might've been if mixed better, as the stuff they play is pretty sensible.
The bass is alright though, even if it feel a bit weird when put together with the rest of the mix.
The melodies are okay, especially when the lead guitar is introduced, but nothing eccentric.
I don't know why, but it feels as if the panning on this mix is slightly tilted towards the left. The guitars aren't spacious either.
The ending was pretty funny, as it was so sudden, and actually kinda terrible (in my hubmle opinion, that is). It didn't sounds like part of the song, for some reason (probably the mixing) :p
All that said, I guess this has potential, and it sure is better than it'd be if I would've done it :D
LunacyEcho responds:
=> guitars =>
I REALLY don't have good guitars. In fact, these aren't actually guitars. They're synthesizers. :) Maybe that's why they sounded so bad.
=> melodies =>
Really? I thought the one at 0:49 had some merit, but only because I'm sure I've heard it before in a much more well-produced song somewhere. Can't figure out where, though.
=> panning =>
??? No idea why.
=> ending =>
The degeneration of endings becomes more apparent as the week progresses. If you didn't like this one, just wait until the one tonight!
Thanks for reviewing! :D Just one more and you're free of your duties!
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