Indeed. Friends are wonderful people to have!
I think you should look for ways to match the guitar with the tone set by the other instruments. I'm not sure how to put it. It sort of sounds very MIDIy. I feel like it contrasts to the atmosphere set by the previous instruments.
The ending was quite abrupt. A delay or simple fade sounds like it would have fit in well. Other than that, everything else is fine!
Abrupt?I'll listen to it more times.
In fact,I haven't gotten full use of my software.I'll use more instruments gradually.
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