tense, neat tonal mix
There was a tension here that I really appreciate, and if this makes sense, a "harmonic dissonance" that appeals to my musical taste. The almost industrial sounding "rattle/shaker" caught me by surprise and gave the tune an interesting twist. Strong strings, I would like to see this one developed into a longer piece.
Thanks, It was going to be longer but it was going to be over 4000kb. the submittion limit