Nice!

Wow, Breaks here are so intensive. Almost all beat is Break!

Generaly really great!
But for me it is bad that the leading instrument of the
choruses has those very high frequencies not filtered out,
or smoothed with a reverb. - It just drills into my ears.

However the drilling has not enough power, to make this
song not enjoyable "nand" beautiful.
Isn't in my favourites. (personal stuff)

Excellent song! This really evolves as it progresses

This is what I want to hear more often on NG, great work! :D

Awesome!