Good for a first.
Nicely done on your first try. My advice? Listen to a lot of what you want to produce, and experiment with a lot of different effects and instruments. It'll help a lot.
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Thanks for the advice. =] Just through this song I probably changed the tracks like 1352462 times. Your stuff will most definatley be listened to.
i think you really did good on your first try :D