Take no offense, its does not sound like Pure Pwnage. i belive you biggest problem was that Big Guitar instrument you had there that can become a bit annoying. try different beats with it or just try a new intrument.but the music was kind of hillarious...which is a good thing....i think.
Anyone can do really good and i belive you can too.
Sides you can always Check out my music too eh? (only asking of course...)
im putting heavy guitars with happy beats and synths. in other words i belive this is somthin new. these arent dark industrial but happy light beats. btw im still savin up for the full version of FL. these are all made with the trial