This is not bad man! I don't listen to a lot of punk but overall I like the genre, including this little song! Something you should pay a lot of attention to is mixing, though. The mix at this point sounds kinda messy, and after 0:21 the vocals become really hard to understand and are too soft IMO.
Composition-wise this is a really good track, but mix-wise you still need to improve! ;)

3,5 Stars

- LiquidOoze

Nice job.. I'm not specifically a punk lover but i hear there's some great quality in this track!