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Inside The Acid Falls

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Author Comments

Death comes slowly. Enjoy the music while you can.


Hmm. Not too bad.

I like your author's comment, btw.

Ventoche might be a bit of a dick to give you a zero rating here, but he does have one point. It's a bit too repetitive.

Now, in ambient, repetitive is ok - but this is a little more upbeat than your typical ambient. As a result, what you've created is more like several layers of textures rather than an ambient atmosphere or song. It sounds good, but it gets a little annoying. Try putting in a simple little melody that just pops in to say hello once in a while, and it'll probably be much, much better.

Now I get into my typical review format:

Flow: The repetitive nature of the song got you a couple points down here. Other than that, the flow was alright. If it had some melody to define it, I could rate this section higher.

Balance: I liked the balance you got out of this. Everything had it's own space and didn't really get in the way of anything else much. Good work here.

Themes: I'm sorry, but I can't say you had much here. Your "textures" cam out ok, but there was no real theme to the piece because it had no melody. The textures did work well together, though.

Effects: I don't really have any complaints with your effects. There was nothing extraordinarily original about them, but there doesn't have to be. You got a got score from me on this section.

Extra: I couldn't award any bonus, unfortunately. (Questions on my review method? http://obsidiansnow.newgrounds.com/ne ws/post/268177 (without the spaces))

Overall: Not too much to say here. You seem to have some potential. [ 7.36 / 10.0 ]. Btw, a tip from me: don't respond to the jerks. There's no point. They probably won't read it anyway.

Not too bad.

Power to you, Kriticke!


Your music is so too much repeatitive. It seem like a techno music, not ambient. Choose the good categories!

Kriticke responds:

Too repetitive. Okay! I'll mess with my songs and make sure to make furture songs much better. Thanks for the imput. TRhe all zero ratings however are ridiculous as it is completely original, diverse, and clear quality, and I worked at least 1-2 hours on it so Please, think about the fact that your laziness and sloppy reviewing makes my songs rating decline for no just cause. However I do appreciate the input and will categorize my works cleaer in the future.

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Credits & Info


4.16 / 5.00

Sep 7, 2006
8:33 PM EDT
File Info
1.8 MB
1 min 57 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.