I must say, you could be one of the new potential great newgrounds artists. It's a nice song, but it does have its problems.
First off, some of the chords/notes that intertwine sound pretty bad. Mainly because your main reoccuring theme in the beginning switches from major to minor, but the other parts of the song don't.
Second, I hate the drums. When they first come, it sounds like its not even on time. And then, in my opinion, you couldv'e used something a little bit heavier, instead of beats on every quarter note.
Just my 2 cents. Keep up the work.
Thank you for the review..I'll try to use what you told me towards future songs. Peace!
I love it.
4-real it kicks A$$ and well just don't stop makin music. That would suck! Great job on change-ups.
Lol you kick a$$! Thanks for the review!
Serene, yet with a showing of feeling.
I like it! Very catchy, and soft. Like a moth with a head, fluttering freely whichever way it wishes, yet with a sense of control directing it on its path to freedom. Overall, this is a great song!
Lol thank you.