I love the first two minutes. The rest of it is almost unpleasant to me.

Sounds like something out of a unity indie horror game. So atmospheric. Love it!

I like the sound layers you've used in your mix. I imagine a Dubstep-Horror song, or something powerful that from nothing makes you feel excited. Maybe a powerful electronic song or (In my music tastes) Metal. I want to listen the full song when it's ready. :)

PD: Sorry for my bad english. Im from Chile :D

I could easily see this music fitting a horror game. You got some great ambiance going on here with the rain-y sounds, the white noiseish stuff. The breathing was a very cool like thing in there as well. All the spooky pads, the wind. I don't normally listen to this kind of stuff often so I don't really know how to critique it to well.

I feel like some of the high whistles are too harsh. Like if I were playing a video game with this in the background, some of those highs might start bothering me, Like at around 2:35. It's good that they're not there the whole time and fade out after a while. There is good amount of variation in this track in general which made this an interesting listen.