I have mixed feelings about this one there are parts I really liked about this and things that I didn't like about it. I thought this had a real promising opening, but about 33 seconds into this you added something to it that sounded flat and out of tune. It gets promising again at the 46 second mark then gets flat and out of tune again at the 59 second mark then it gets good again at the 1minute 24 second mark again. This could be a really strong piece if you fix the places I marked by either taking it out or replacing it with something else.