hey Klace. love the new song. but i have to agree with david. the cymbals and gong are overpowering everything and it takes you from dream to wide waking if you know what i mean. try quieter suspended cymbal rolls, and quick quiet cymbal scratches. maybe instead of a gong you could use a splash cymbal or something or just turn it into a cymbal roll but remember, it has to be quiet.
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