Hmm....mixed feelings

Lol, okay well I think this is a very fun song and it sounds pretty. but it could use some variety throughout. I noticed you added some stuff but essentially it was the same beat throughtout. I liked how it went back and forth (Tremolo I think it is?) and that sounded really cool. However the main melody got too repetitive and it bordered on annoying, but I guess it would be good for like a game with battle sequences, you know?

Your creativity is what's key in these songs...now just apply it with technique and practice! :)

Not Bad

Not Bad for your first time on FL. Much better then what I did (A piano solo). I was too scared to use more than one or two instruments lol.

What were you using before?

Since this is your first time on FL I won't be so uptight and strict. Overall it's a very nice first piece. Something you would expect from a first-timer. I'm positive you will grow and become great.

I remember when I was like you, I would always tell MaestroSorrow how I would never be as good as him and how great he is. Do you know what he told me? He said someday I'd be right there next to him or beyond him.

I'm definately not there yet, but I believe i'm getting there slowly but surely and I'm sure you will too.

I'm not saying to strive to go beyond someone else (though that is perfectly fine) just strive to do your best, learn, prosper, and get better and better and better until you get to the point where you feel you have reached your limits.

Once you reach your limits, stretch them. Take them and make many pieces from all the knowledge you've gained.

And then, once you feel you've stretched your limits to beyond and as far as you can... your ready to leave newgrounds and go into the big wide world. To take your limits and go beyond them into the unlimited.

That's my retarded little philosophy at least which I plan on accomplishing.

I look foward to the day you are as good or better than me.

3/5