this rocks out loud.
this rocks, my pet tokay gecko, jack, even like it. rock on! ^_^ a few slip in the end, but this thing is kicking butt and it doensn't pull it down in the least.
The reverbed guitar gives a good effect. I'd even say the melody is nice. Again, add a drum part and a bass part. And also, get yourself a better recording equipment, you'll gain alot, trust me ^_^!
I was working on this the other night. I couldn't get the drums right, though. Maybe when you come over to my house, we can record it with a metronome/whatnot. That way adding other tracks manually will be a piece of cake. I got an amazing sound out of your sample here, so it shall be even more so on the final recording. ;) Keep it up.