needs more of a melody for me to enjoy thid repeats to o much at the start
wish the kicks would hit harder and deeper
theres a hand ful of time where the song sounds muddy with to much sounds going on
2 12 melody seems to randomly come in needs a better transition maybe have a softer sound fade it in before then drop it in.
this sounds like something i would make when i started makeing music keep up the work n.n