The effect would've worked if it wasn't so repetitive, It still feels great to listen to this, good audio mastering, several attempts to make it funny to listen, feels good, it's a bit too bad to know that it's 3 minutes long with the same tune going on plus the starting and the ending feels really wierd, the ending is making wierd fades out, and the FX at the beginning feels a bit... alone.
Keep working on this, I think we're on something, good luck. :)