I liked the beginning a lot, mellow music has always been one of my favorites. When the second guitar came in, though, I felt like it made the song too cluttered, and it seemed to hurt my ear a bit. I would suggest making the song a little slower if you wanna continue working on it. It felt a little repetitive, but I felt like it used that to it's advantage. So, I think you should keep working on it.
Author Comments
A short clip of a song I am working on and want you guys to judge if I should keep going or to scrap it. I've been stuck on this song for about a month now and I can't seem to progress.
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- 811
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- Waiting for 4 more votes
- Uploaded
- Jan 8, 2015
- 2:52 PM EST
- Genre
- General Rock
- File Info
- Song
- 2.6 MB
- 1 min 10 sec
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