Loved everything, buuuut. the vocals need to be louder they got drowned out by the beat pretty bad. Otherwise it's a good composition and i love the lyrics you have written ;)
4.5/5
-Dave-
Full Electro-Industrial track here. Once again I'm trying out two different vocal styles for this one in experimentation. Let me know what you guys think!
Apologies about the mastering, this was done at like 2am with neighbors trying to sleep. Headphones on haha
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Hail my arising,
Pay tribute to the land,
Bathed in the Nether with thou subjects of the Damned,
Turncoats suffer before me,
Disgusting creatures snarling,
I encase them in metal, cybernetic embalmed.
Line up and plug in, you are now my property,
Arise my steel souls, endless rule foreseen.
Lost to me, your crusade failed
Left upon a spike your chances impaled
Settling for surrender is your key to survival.
I'll drag you through to the cyber forge
Encase your flesh in metal, your life disgorged
Arise as a knight to my Synthetic Plutocracy
Bathe in the glory of my empire
Networked to my rules, unleash the hellfire!
Desolation rules in the mind through the worst of all
Captured, manipulated, it's all enthralled
Grab your sword and rifle, march upon the battlefield
To serve the king, the fate of the realm is sealed!
Thrust your blade through the enemies decaying soul,
Aim your rifle and fire, their minds blown out of the clean hole.
Lost to me, your crusade failed
Left upon a spike your chances impaled
Settling for surrender is your key to survival.
I'll drag you through to the cyber forge
Encase your flesh in metal, your life disgorged
Arise as a knight to my Synthetic Plutocracy
Bow to your king!
Bow to my Synthetic rule!
Loved everything, buuuut. the vocals need to be louder they got drowned out by the beat pretty bad. Otherwise it's a good composition and i love the lyrics you have written ;)
4.5/5
-Dave-
I'm rating the music and not the vocals, I think this is super perfect for my movie but do you have an instrumental (no vocals) version of this or can you put up an instrumental version, I want to use your music for my movie, it's such an impeccable fit
wow interesting
Reminds me of White zombie...ya know before it was just Rob zombie? I really got into the beat and the dark melody. I wouldn't have known what the lyrics were without you posting them...which adds to mystery of it. Although I do enjoy hearing clean vocals throughout a song...a problem i find myself overdoing lately.
But overall great job, i loved the tone of the vocals and how it followed the darkness of the whole thing. Nice job buddy.
This is awesome!
You had me at the beat in the beginning already :p
Great instrumentation overall.
I personally liked the vocal styles.
Congratz on being featured on the frontpage today, you definitely deserve it ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.