It fail to blow my mind, it fail to make me feel like im in it. I hate electro music. However i think you got potential to do good music. Start studying serious stuff now.
Nice and Mellow
Having a melodic song is good every now and then. I can defiantly see this tune being used in a submission, and especially because it is the right season for this kind of music. I think the Industrial section of the audio portal probably gets more hits in October then any other month of the year.
Although very good, the dynamic range of this track doesn’t change a lot. This leaves me to think that you could cut the time down about 1 minute.
Another good track and a very good one if you are working on a Halloween Flash movie.
Keep up the good work!
I gather if I responded to your other one, I might as well respond to this one.
First things first, I didn't make this for Halloween; not much point in making season songs IMO, especially for one such as myself, since in Hungary we don't celebrate it...
And yeah, I know about the dynamic range, but I think it would've ruined the deep, maybe a bit depressing sound if it went any higher. And if it went any lower, the bass would've fucked everything into overdrive, which, obviously, I don't really want. Cutting down on the length might be a good idea if I get around to rewriting the song, but I still don't feel like doing it yet. Maybe if I'll get myself to making those lyrics it won't be a problem...
Anyhow, thanks for the review,
ur industrial stuff rocks. I know someones already said it but leave the other shit alone. The other stuffs not bad but your industial is so much better. Make more of what ur really good at.
hmm... perhaps you guys are right, industrial suits me best. but I wouldn't like to make only one style of music. well... I guess focusing on one genre doesn't mean ignoring the others.
oh, and thanks for the review :)