Not for my ears.
You're ability to Vox is that of your run of the mill scene vocalist.
I love this song..
I, for one, love the vocals..they remind me of Horse the Band's lead singer...
Interesting and unique piece
Interesting piece. I went back and listened to the original and in all honesty, your remix is more enjoyable overall. The original was very rough and the vocals sounded cracked alot. the percussion in the original was minimal and often lost beat, which threw off the flow. your remix follows the premise of the original, but also lessens the blow of cracked vocals and rough percussion use. the general melody of both were nice, simple, but nice. and your remix flowed so much better.
overall: 7/10 & 4/5
Just a thought but the original was please with a cherry on top, but this is sounds like please with a slap in the face, xD. It's just how he's screaming, that's all lol. not bad.
faved it. the songs takes you into different spheres. unfortunatly sometimes the vocals could be a little better, but thei'r unique!