You did manage to solve some problems from the first version. I can tell you put some effort in to it, ,not really my style though.
But man you have a very nasty habit of putting things in the wrong categories. This is not techno:)
gave it an 3 though.
you're welcome to check some of my stuff in.
I had no idea of what other category to put it in...gah. What would YOU do? Indie? Rock? Ambient? Trance? This loop doesn't really fit. Hooray, I'm breaking the mould!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.