THis is great! It reminds me of the OST of the Scott Pilgrim games. I like the melody of the song and the many variations it has. But since it is meant to be a credits song ( I guess, from the title) I don't think it should fade out but have a definite ending, maye getting a little slower near the ending. But otherwise, great song. Keep it up :D
I was wondering what do you compose first? The chord progressions or the melody? I personally find that whenever i make a chord progression first i often end up making terrible melodies (with some big exceptions) It seems easier to compose on a melody, do you agree? I hear some little nuances here and there that i recognice from my own techniques so that resonates. I particularily love the sound of the electric guitar~ish instrument (just before the drums start) but the melody of it is a bit ehm.. random to my mind. (1:18 is where it screws up imo) If it were up to me i'd redo that part with something less out of place. -cal. For the remainder it has its strenghts and its weaknesses, theres just a few too many odd notes in there, while it has enough potential.
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