I quite like this. I can you have some potential.
The drum beat is nice, you could try and use some better bass drums to make it sound more drum and bassy. The snare you have is quite nice.
If you worked on the bass lines abit more and gave them a more warping feel that would be cool.
You should try a short intro to your tune. Abit of atmophere or a nice synth, then drop in your beat and gradually build it up.
Anyway, I'm crap at reviewing music so I'll piss off.
Well done and keep practising!
first of all, thank you for the review!
and for the constructive critism, it is truly appreciated...like i said i just got a new program and im trying to learn everything when i have spare time and really enjoy doing this and i am happy that people enjoy it, i hope to get better within this year so be onthe lookout =)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.