I guess you know for yourself what you did wrong and what could be improved. ;)
For your first ever recorded track, it was good. Though, I can't hear the drums, or was the hi-hat just for timing?
Also, good opening riff, I would redo this one, building on that.
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE_555! You voted 4 for to the core!, lowering its score from 4.25 to 4.20.
i had guitar drums and bass but something didn't work and the other tracks didn't play i guess