It's got it's own sound to it, so kudos to you for that. It feels like a really cinematic song, something that you would hear playing at the end or the beginning of a certain type of film. The end is kind of poor, but if you put the song on a loop it works really well. I don't know if that was your intent, but nonetheless.
See if you can work on it a little bit more, maybe there's more ideas to be mined out of it. Aside from all that I think it's a pretty good piece. Good job.
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