May not be as good as John Williams, but you're definetly getting there. The blending in the music was amazing.
My friend is part of an animation crew. I'll tell him about this song.
I liked your melody...but why not make the strings do something else...at least let them dynamically rise and fall...to add movement. but it is a good piece...just needs a bit more tweaking.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.