This is very good, I know you're using FL. (cause of the black hole sound at the beginning) when you render your song, try rendering it at about 320kbps. It makes for a better signal strength in mp3 form, and will make your sounds even more clear. But NICE WORK. Check mine out! I use FL too you might recognize some of my sounds ((:
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