I don't know about small speakers, but on earphones it works just wonderfully.
An interesting mix for sure, you mixed in that piano pretty well with everything else. Did you apply a flanger effect on that piano, it seems oddly, yet pleasently, twisted in sound.
Very interesting synths, I don't think i've heard them around, but they work quite well here.
I'm sorry I don't have much to say, i'm not very well versed in the electronic world yet. However from some of your songs I think you enjoy instrumentals as well. I would like to ask you to listen to my first songs, I plan to dive into electronic music, and would like to see if you have any ideas on what I could do to these pieces electronically.
5/5 from me DrMontigo, this was truly entertaining to listen to.