Its cute. I would work on it to straighten out those rough edges. Maybe add another instrument to play over top. I'd also work on the beat drops and buildups. I really love the sound at 1:30. Reminds me of two games, civ and mega man. Really nice. I'd put that in the song more. I like how quiet it gets there too.
Thx! I really appreciate that you took your time to write this review!
I'll work more on my technique.