The intro is too videogamey for me, but the rest really conveys something. Also, I guess the title should be 'The Roses of Ritalin', shouldn't it? And, would you mind putting this song under a Creative Commons license? Right now, the licensing terms make it impossible for me to use this for anything and I am not allowed to spread this piece :(
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.