Nice build-up, but the hi-hats were too powerful in the beginning...almost had to turn it off (very sensitive ears) - I'm glad I didn't.
Impressive mix of oscillators, with some really phat sounds in there too. The interlude was unexpected, but really great, especially the pitch bends. I think the arps come in, the lead should probably fade back a bit more.
The ending lacked a little oomph. Everything came back together, which was nice...maybe it just didn't have enough bass. Yeah, that's probably it.