Thoght i'd drop a visit at your page at 4:30 in the morning... yes, caffeine keeps the body alive so that it can self destruct slowly yes?
Anyways. I really liked this piece, truly it was ambiance. You've improved a LOT in such a short time. I would just say be careful with your sounds, remember to use the compresser effect in your master mixer, i'm hearing a great deal of distortion in the song, on the edges, not huge distortion that overpowers instruments, but distortion that says unmastered.
Other then that, at so late, this song really relaxed me. Take a visit to my new page sometime, and check out my new song, I think you'll like it.
I actually DID use the compressor... I had just forgotten to listen To the mp3 before I submitted it or I would have noticed tha t it was not EQd at all