it does have a pretty stealthy feel to it, but I didn't think the claps helped at all. I feel that you should have removed those entirely.
Try adding reverb, preset 4 (cathedral) to the hi hats, I promise, the effect will be neat.
Also, try some nice, long extended notes, to make it more stealthy sounding.
Not bad, keep them coming, you'll get there!
thanks. btw, its 212 bpm.