For your next song, focus on your melodies as much as you can. Try creating a really really awesome chord progression and some really really awesome melodies that sound professional-grade. Screw VSTs, mixing, mastering, backgrounds, etc. Just compose the sexiest melodies you can muster. Do it!
For this one, the effects that came in around 1:40 are super nice. You're getting really good at those. Maybe try creating your own drum beats if you don't want to do the melody thing?
It's hard :/
But yes, I will!
Also, all the drum beats are all my own haha
bruuh this song would be so sick for a game. this is the first song i have listened to on newgrounds