Really enjoyed the warm pads that you used! The plucks you used really made the song flow and I enjoyed the push they gave the overall song. The drums were really really muffled which did not help push the song. Louder drums and a more complex drumline could really help flesh out this song. It feels a bit empty. I feel if you were going to work on something, it would be to find an appropriate bassline, but your melody work is really really well done.
needs drums :3
the lpf dips to low at parts(prob sounds better with headphones)
the melody and pad vs of the melody feel randomsometimes threw out the song