Ahhhhhrrrg

Good job.

Amazingly done, with every new submission comes a new hope that you may top yourself once again. And so with this beautiful piece of music you have. It's impressive, although it does require work, i do believe you can truly make it as an artist if you keep trying.

You have talent, now let's see that talent put to work!

solid

nice piano loops and over all, good job.......

Wow.

You've got some great talent, I love this song. Brilliant stuff. I agree with SBB, better piano samples would make for some improvement but in my personal opinion it sounds fine as is.

New review

The first "piano" (which I would really call rhodes, or jazz vibes- I'm sure that's not the piano you mentioned in the response to the last review, right?) has generally a nice sound, though I'm not so sure about that panning lfo you used on it. The second piano has some very nice ideas for melodies, though the samples you use are pretty basic sounding. It sounds generally pretty thin, and how you didn't use reverb on it makes that pretty obvious- put some more reverb on it, it can make even the crappiest sounds (I'm NOT saying that the piano is- but it's actually pretty close) sound great. If you do that, or find a more interesting piano sound they would stay awesome because of the great melody work you put into it.

For the drums- again I'm impressed over the originality of those. Now it sounds quite a bit more like if you used a sliced drum loop though. But I love the samples, and especially the patterns they got. Formant-sounding thing that I can't decide if is a rim or a snare, that was a bit out of it's place though- it stands out too much compared to the rest of the drums. In my opinion.

In the second half you have some great synth sounds. The sequence going in the background is real nice, i'd love if that one was more present in the mix. Also many sounds that I can't quite put my finger on sounds damn nice and give the track a professional feeling. Great work on those synths. Now I have no comments on the orchestral work in the start and the pads, I'm pretty much neutral to them. They are neccesary for the track to sound good though.

I don't really like the drop in the middle, it makes the track sound empty more than making a calm break in the middle of the song. I suggest adding more unique stuff to that part, and prolly keep the drums there, or at least a variation of them.

I really like this song. If you get some better piano samples it'll be pretty awesome. Also some minor stuff that is really just my opinion- you should find out what sounds best for yourself