I've heard same song, but better?
Ok, this was submitted in 2006? I heard the same song in 2007 on DanceFactoryFM on 99.9FM. Except...it was flippin awesome. Did this guy hit it big? Did someone steal his song and make it what it should've been? Or is this just one of those songs that everybody covers? This is a decent version but the song I heard last night blew me away.
Did you get a new mic. yet?
very nice i love the music and the lyrics!
Its so creative. Yeah unless you already got a new mic..... GET ONE!lol
Also your songs are great but i think it need a better Kick ... maybe deeper.
GREAT SONG check out mine tell me what you think for a 12 year old.
Yes it is..
Nothing wrong with a slow build up i like the feel of it too. yeah new mic..
Yes thanks for the comment, but I'm sure I could have put more climax and less build up!
I agree. The earth is in fact round!
decent tune. However, I found the build up to be a little slow. I also thing the song needs a little more depth to it. oh and yes, you need a new microphone! I would also recomend to bump your vocal levels so I can here them better.
thanks for reading
Believe it or not the vocals were at max volume! I simply could not sing loud or the mic would betray me in some way. haha
thx for the honest criticism tho