Amazing! although I think the beginning is a little too intense and loud and stuff. Overall great though! Keep up the almost-amazing work!
I think with a little more spread out and build you can work this into a good remix. I love how it builds up, but yeah get more spread going. Also watch that snare, other than that nice job on it!
The tune is overall too loud and busy, making it hard to listen to.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.