It's very different, but I like it. Really spontaneous and interesting. It was a combination of a few different things but it felt loose and comfortable. Good work!
The song was okay but however the song is not in tune and a bit off timing in my opinion and the genre need to be changed to "Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Modern Rap" instead of "Electronic - House" but i did liked the part at 2:12-2:38 simply amazing. LOL!
Anyways this need some work but hey most people can improve a lot by practicing and i think that you're one of them.
Keep it going!
-ihatebeer (Hunter Bennett Stewart)
Thanks for the review :). It was fun to make. The synth is tuned to A=432, so half step down.