Hmm, my first thought, is you need better samples. What program are you using? I would like to offer my assistance in helping you get some better sounds. I feel with some better strings samples, this would have invoked the image you wanted.
I'm not saying I didn't get it, but it was distorted, and hard to picture, not because of the song, but because of the samples.
The song didn't change in direction too much, as it seemed to be the same thing again and again, but it makes for a good loop.
I would have liked to hear a flute in this piece, I think that would have said "open fields" a tad better.
Oh well, good stuff, keep them coming!
Flutes. Okey Dokey. As for where I can get better samples, I really dont know.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.