The vocals are done well. I could hear them clearly and understand what they were saying, which is a good thing. Many artists struggle to mix vocals with a track because the voice has such a dynamic range.
However, your percussion needs a bit of work. It felt a little empty in a lot of places and lacked any sort of melody. The bassline also clashes with your kick, and you could remedy that by sidechaining.
Overall I can tell what you are going for. Almost a Pronobozo type of feel. I think you could improve upon this and make it something remarkable. Keep it up and don't stop. :)
Guys got great flow and energy. Got a huge Funcrusher Plus vibe out of this (the low-fi minimalist beat, etc). The bassline's really cool, too. The mix could probably use a few tweaks -- the drums sound a little rough, and the kick and bass have a weird relationship going on, but that's minor. The track's really cool, I dig it.
once the piano kicks in it gives the tune some color, really nice work man.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.