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Uploaded
Nov 4, 2014 | 11:02 AM EST
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Song
1.9 MB
1 min 38 sec
Score
5.00 / 5.00

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Rated 5.00 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Other - World
Tags:
experimental
world
progress
flstudio

Author Comments

I first posted my sample here with full inspirations for this song:
http://jeimpersonal-journey.tumblr.com/post/101762755187/i-did-more-experimenting-here-i-have-played-with
but I also thought of posting the song here too.

I am thinking of changing the sound of the final project once I find a way to get more instrument options, but since this sounds pretty good for a beginner, I thought I would share this.

EDIT : Sorry for the longer pause at the end. It was not noticed until last minute.

Reviews


OrochiiOrochii

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This is really good for a first song!
Could use some drums though. :)
Otherwise, really cool, i loved the melody.


jeim responds:

Thank you so much!! I was stuck with how to do the drums there though.
I only have the FL Studio demo version. I think if I have more instruments to choose from, then I can explore more options.

But I love FL Studio so far, and I hope to do more with it!


CGA-999CGA-999

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very nice, but I have some suggestions.

Cut out the last 15 seconds, there isn't much there.
Add drums, that would sound awesome.
Make multiple sections, because it is repetitive to listen to the same line for a minute and a half.

Thank you for considering my suggestions, and I hope you are successful with your music!


jeim responds:

Thank you for your comment!

I did notice that last minute of the blank part. I think that was what happened after I saved it, I just did not change it.
I was trying to do a beat here, but got stuck. So all there was is the tambourine.

Also, that was my second time trying to make a song. The first time it had more of a drum beat with sample vocals. But I am still experimenting and I was working on another version that I feel may be better. But I think I may need the full version of FL Studio for more instrument options. I only have the demo version.


RangerInTheWoodsRangerInTheWoods

Rated 3 / 5 stars

As your first song, this is really good. But as i have been dabbling in music for two years, i have to say that the melody after a few seconds, should have paused for just a little bit longer.

I see you went a little bit for the ambiance side. The melody is good, but needs something to make it more catchy, like drums, but you didn't add any drums, so the song was light, but sometimes you want that. The hat was a nice touch, and the ambiance is fine.


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jeim responds:

OH! Thank you so much for your feedback! This was my first song I really tried making, but technically my second time trying to make something. The first time I experimented with vocals and sounds that kind of sounded like drums to me.

This song is longer, and I actually tried a melody. But actually, I wanted to add drums. I started to with the tambourine, but then I got stuck. I am still working on trying to make beats, as well as melody.