A strange (but interesting) combination of sounds and styles.
In a piece like this, with such variety of changes, you need better transitions to keep it smooth, otherwise, it seems you just jump from one part to another.
Around 1:25 (the part with the panned bass-ish and kick) and near the end, sounds are too clicky.
And as a side note, I think this would go better in the "experimental" or "fusion" genre.
Wow! These were some of the most wonderfully constructive arranged letters i've ever read regarding my tunes.
The Jump was unplanned at first, but then it kind of grew on me. I'll call it "artist's intent" and "artistic freedom". And a little freedom doesn't hurt.
Which sounds exactly did you find too clicky? Probably the bass ostinato and the bass drum in the mini-bridge between contrasting parts.
You are absolutely right with the last sentence. Those genres could have been better, but i'm convinced that you can dance to this. (or maybe someone else)
Thank you for your review!! You just made me the happiest little Melkor or Morgoth. You can call me both or you can just call me al. Have a good day or whatever time it is where you are at. :)
still a long way to go, friend.
Do you even see my way from where you are?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.