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My Last Chance (clip)

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Hey guys, would really like some feedback on this one. Im experimenting with genres at the moment and would love some other people opinions :)

leaving a review would be much appreciated :)

- Teal

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Well, this is pretty neat even though it's just a clip.

Overall, I think you need to add a little more to the song as a whole. It just doesn't seem like there is enough going here especially for a short clip (which you want to be involved). For example, I hear maybe two or three cymbals in total. Vary that S*** up man! Put in like 10 or 15 different samples and make them all fit into their own little niche, make it interesting.

Work on your bass a little bit more, make it stand out. It's more of a background noise when, in Trance you really want your bass to be influential in your songs.

THE SIDECHAIN, SIDECHAIN EVERYWHERE! I would say, tone it down just a little bit, don't rely to heavily on sidechain to make your songs sound good.

Overall, 3/5. Not bad, keep at it!

SkullDrone responds:

I totally agree with you on every aspect (lol)

I know it needs a lot of work and I will be working on it more. This is basically a sketch.

yeah i got really lazy with the sidechain haha

Thank you for the comment :)

Credits & Info

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Listens
405
Downloads
11
Score
Waiting for 4 more votes

Uploaded
Oct 27, 2014
7:36 PM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
2.6 MB
1 min 10 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.