I do fully understand this seems like one of your first ever tracks and that you have definitely improved since then when I have listened to your newer pieces in comparison but I'll still comment on my immediate thoughts upon listening to this piece.
The most annoying reoccurring part of the track is the distorted Gate noise which phases in and out of the track continuously in the track. I'm sure if you were to ever revisit this track you could always just heavily compress the distortion down with a good Stereo Buss Compressor unit and quieten it down and it should sound alright.
I do actually like how nicely the deeper bass-line sounds half-way through the track when it is introduced. Not too keen on the constantly reoccurring electro organ-esq sine lead which accompanies it though.
I don't really have any complaints about the Drum samples used, it sounds fine. Just wished there was abit of variety in with it aswell as the rest of the track.
I'd say if you were to ever revisit this track in the future and remake this to the same quality as some of your other tracks like "Sleazy like Saturday Evening" or "Liquified Velociraptor" then I would happily review it again and score it higher.
arrghh that bloody distorted sound.
it sounds hideous and doesn't work with the playful chord progression and bassline in the slightest.
it literally sounds like an audio glitch that isn't meant to be in the song.
This is nearly 7 minutes of an awful distorted sound, a generic chord progression, a basic beat and the same bassline.
and over again.
very very repetitive and boring.
on the production side of things, the mix is pretty crap.
i'd focus on making a good song before getting in to all the technical production side of music making though, because this is a really bad song.
you have to start somewhere. just keep practising.