I love the soft synths in the background, as well as your choice for beats. Beautiful, bouncy melodies in this track. Very nice! Nice little break in there.
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Its good that you tried to add many patterns and transitions but it feels inconsistent .
I think choices of vsts could be better because harmonies don't work very well .
Also you should have build the melody into something faster toward teh middle .
Track is 7 minutes and you did like 4 builds up .
I think you have the right idea just need to be more mindful of progression and harmony .
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.