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UPADTE (1): Just changed something to fix the emptiness of the song. Now it sounds a little less empty! XD

UPDATE (2): Okie. I just tried to make the lead melody a little fuller, and added some drum variations to the second half of the song. I'm OFFICIALLY done with this song. XD

Wow. I finished this one fast. Then again, I spent the entire day working on it. XD

Not gonna lie, it sounds dry in some areas, but believe me when I say I tried countless things to fix that. Ah well, no excuses on my part.

I wasn't sure what genre to put it in, but I hope you enjoy it nonetheless. If you could tell me what genre it SHOULD be in, I'll change it right away!

Oh, and expect that second song sometime soon! ^~^

Reviews are much appreciated. (I kinda need them XD)


The reason why the song sounds empty is because besides the super simple and generic dubstep drumbeat, all that's left are a couple of leads and some background chords that become extremely repetitive.
You should add a bass instrument, some stringed instruments (accoustic or synth), as well as more leads and maybe some more drum samples.
To make a melody stand out, it needs more than one instrument to play it. You can create several leads that each take turns playing the melody, or you can layer different leads of different octaves on top of each other.

There's a lot more I can criticize, but I need to keep this review short since I have a busy homework night.

If you decide to make any changes, please let me know. You created some great melodies and I would love to hear them come to life.

Exilious responds:

Finally! Something I can work with! You don't know how much I appreciate this. I'm not too sure if I will come back to this song. I don't know, so be on the look out for a remastered version of this song.

Once again, thank a bundle for the review! ^~^

Very bright and happy. Nice!

Exilious responds:

Not as happy as the pole in my pants! ^~^

I liked it. It had a good overtone but it's too loopy in the beginning.
I don't know why, but it kinda drove out of the rhyme at about 1:20

Exilious responds:

Yeah, the beginning melody didn't have much variation to be honest. Neither did the main melody. I have an idea for another song which well hopefully have more variation in melody.

Thanks for the review! ^~^

Beginning is very cool . Although maybe you should have kept the energy up instead of going into mellow moment .

The high pick of melody is missing I would say but the build up and rest are good . I would just add another faster pattern in the middle with different drums .

Exilious responds:

I agree completely! The melody felt really bland to me. I should've done a better job with that. I can't place what was missing. I think I'm gonna go back and fix it. I want it to sound REALLY complete. I'm glad you enjoyed it though! Thanks for the review man. ^~^

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3.64 / 5.00

Oct 20, 2014
7:45 PM EDT
File Info
9.1 MB
3 min 59 sec

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