its was good......but....
you just gotta put more emphasis in ya lines. The beat was fire.
Say this shit was mint fool. You really spittin fire and da beat was bangin. Hit me up sometime wit a collab. firstname.lastname@example.org
I was ok, maybe one day we will rap together
I liked it, the beat was good too. You should made the chorus sound less like the verse (sound effects) You can review some of my songs as well. I rap and make the beats.
shits hot, like the beat an the strings. Rhymes are strong but the rapper in the first verse needs to put in more energy. keep em comin.
its pretty good
i like the beat and i like the flow but the guy rapping has to go at it more good rhymes though keep it up all of your crew, check out my shit thanks bro